Reviews for Cherry Lips Rewritten
bookworm134 chapter 1 . 6/24/2016
This was a beautiful little story. I wish it was longer but I really enjoyed the characters and the world building. I hope you continue in this world.

Keep up the great work!
SlashLover chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
Fun story. I enjoyed it very much.
R. Ficst chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
Very cute :) Love the techno twins.
I wonder how they will progress, when Chael's indenture is paid, how exactly do they free him, can he choose to keep some of the cool martial arts skills? do all of his memories return? does he feel any conflict, or just reaffirm that he really loves Gregor? What new challenges might they face together? Does he become a permanent agent as well? A sequel could be interesting.
Kenny Deheart chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Very nice. I know you wrote this a couple of years ago but keep up the great writing.
picabone99 chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
such a great story. love the characters. wish you would write a sequel, i'm curious about what happend to the twins.
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
cute and unexpected ending. great postmodernism thrown in there. thanks for sharing!
theauthor94 chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
I would love to read a story about the twins and their brother.

This was really good. I want to know more about all of the characters in it. :D Keep up the good work.
foolsdance chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Loved this! You packed a lot into a relatively short story, nicely drawn characterizations and great plot. Thanks for sharing.
Rustaam chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
I really want a story from the twins pov from before they came to workfor the police to past the events at the end.
Junai chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
This was simply amazing. I'm impressed how much you were able to flesh out the alternate universe in the span of this short story. It made me want to read more.

Your characters, especially Chael, were solid and real to me. And the ending? That was very unexpected. Although, it did feel slightly rushed. Now I want to know more about the three siblings :)

Please, would you consider a sequel?
history943 chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
I love your story ! It is really cute !
Crazy Hats chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
This was fantastic! I loved your character! Favs Story
deformed beauty chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
very well written and i really liked the story :D

made me giggle too. a lot
B-Rose chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
I really liked this story. I didn't realize what story it was until I read it now and I actually remember it from before. Did you just fix it up or change the story around? Because i hadn't read the original in a while I don't see any obvious differences but what do I know. Anyway, really enjoyed the story!
Qui chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
oo. Hot. I only sorta remember the original, but this was very good.