|Reviews for Pearls of Everlasting Love|
| lili999 chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Cheap retail watch, sunglasses, belt, hats/caps, High quality T-shirts,
ED hardy t-shirts,ED Hardy hoodies,ED hardy ,Jeans,GUCCI shoes,LV Handbag,Chanel
Handbag…high quality,low to
| eaststar chapter 2 . 4/5/2010
In "A sweet calming scent invaded their nostrils" , the word "invaded" is being used in the wrong context. Normally to invade is to barge in, uninvited; to take over. Nice chapter though the opening was a bit slow. Put a bit of action in your beginnings!
| Makia-chan chapter 2 . 4/3/2010
It truly is an . God. moment. i can't wait for the next chapter
thank you! ;3
| Makia-chan chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Wow. thanks for the first chapter i can't absolutely wait for the next one.
| eaststar chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Lol I'm really obsessed with your writing! Can I be your number 1 fan? Really nice start to a story though when writing a beginning, you might want to lay off the description and just focus on taking hold on the readers interest. Though it isn't as bad as the overly descriptive beginnings of some other young, aspiring writers on this site 0 Keep on writing!