Reviews for This Cant Be Wrong
Blessing963 chapter 1 . 7/1/2017
boring poetry
DreamExplicitly chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
I love this! There was passion in those words and I hope that you continue to write like this
Xades chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
Aaahh! I love it!
lizzybee37 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Oh, this is sexy. :D It got me so wet. Good job!
kb chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
wow amazing. turned me on quite a bit.
Shaileigh chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
That's so friggin' adorable.

I can relate to it so much, too.

The flow was great and I was left wanting more, yet at the same time it was the perfect way to end.

Great job!
Alistine chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Not a bad poem, though there were a few grammar mistakes...but it shouldn't be rated K. This should be rated M.

Great imagery, though. Made me think of my girlfriend :}
16yearold girlie chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
that was great i like it alot kinda got me thinkin, it sorda turned me on hehe
eblakes93 chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
This was like a major turn-on in rhyme form. Nuff said.
ma chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Really good poem! Great job
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 4/1/2010