Reviews for the life that i live
ForTheLoveOfWords chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
such beautiful language and diction you use.

really raw emotion for me.

like it. a lot
R.J. Michael chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Well done Lee, there's a tumultuous tug within every few lines that fits with the nature of this piece.

Keep em coming
William G. Thorne chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
sounds like theres a great deal of bullying going on. I think this poem is very well composed, the lack of rhythm mirrors the turmoil talked about in the poem itself. I like that, it adds to its intensity. well done!

-William