|Reviews for the life that i live|
| ForTheLoveOfWords chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
such beautiful language and diction you use.
really raw emotion for me.
like it. a lot
| R.J. Michael chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Well done Lee, there's a tumultuous tug within every few lines that fits with the nature of this piece.
Keep em coming
| William G. Thorne chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
sounds like theres a great deal of bullying going on. I think this poem is very well composed, the lack of rhythm mirrors the turmoil talked about in the poem itself. I like that, it adds to its intensity. well done!