Reviews for Loving Charlie Evans |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome new chapter! Sorry I'm reviewing on the first chapter, but my internet is being sucky. But yeah, awesome! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOOOOO! I was ready to click the next chapter button, but then i saw chapter 26 wasn't out yet. Hope the next one comes REALLY REALLY REALLY soon! This chapter was amazing. You did such a great job:D I love all your chapters that i have read and the story is greatly awesome:] Again hope the next chapter comes soon... PLEASE! Anyway good job:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story so far. I'm glad that you're continuing it! :) These past couple of chapters have kept me on the edge - update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh No! Please No! Derek's going to end up with her and Charlie's going to die! NOOOO! pLEASE? Way to painfull for me to read that. ~Ash |
![]() ![]() I love this story! I read the entire thing tonight (its 5am right now). Haha. But I honestly cant get enough of this story. I hope Bonnie ends up with Derek later on after shes okay with Charlie dying. I really dont want Charlie to die though! I love him. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I expected it all along! I like the way, you kept it long before Bonnie found out about his illness, it made it seem realistic. But what I don't like, is that your chapter was short, better make Chapter 25 a lengthy one! Hope you update soon, ~Ash |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good so far! I really like the first few chapters. It may take me a while, but I plan to read the rest a.s.a.p :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Derek could throw everything he had ta her but she knew it wasn't him - did you mean at? Very good chapter, I can't wait to read more! I dislike cliffhangers doe this reason :P Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chapter, I can't wait to see how the party goes! Funny reading this the day after my 17th birthday XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah it kept me on the edge sorta. But it was good(: update soon, pleasee? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intense chapter. I loved it, but hated it at the same time cause of the car / Update soon, please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() lvee itt. please write moree ((: |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was really really really good :) Sad, but good. Keep up the good work, cause I'm looking forward to seeing the inevitable talk with Bonnie and Charlie :) I like the ending, how he pretty much saved her. And then how her mother and friend just listened to her, that was pretty amazing. I know, my mom can't go without interrupting me when I go to talk about things. I don't think she can resist it lol. But anyway, keep up the good work, and update soon? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Serously? "Bonnie-," he started to call out to her. But Bonnie ignored him. She just kept on walking towards the door. Walking, wlaking, walking... -.-" I hope he ran after her so they could SPEAK. I'm sure they did. Why did you end the chapter with that? HELLO? It's been a prolong while since you have updated and when you finally did you cut through their romance, so we could wait till the NEXT chapter. I demand more, in SHORT time please. yours truly ~Ash :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah you need to update! I really want to know what is wrong with Charlie. |