Reviews for Loving Charlie Evans
Elastic chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Awesome new chapter! Sorry I'm reviewing on the first chapter, but my internet is being sucky. But yeah, awesome! :D
VampBUNNIES chapter 25 . 8/9/2011
NOOOOO! I was ready to click the next chapter button, but then i saw chapter 26 wasn't out yet. Hope the next one comes REALLY REALLY REALLY soon! This chapter was amazing. You did such a great job:D I love all your chapters that i have read and the story is greatly awesome:] Again hope the next chapter comes soon... PLEASE! Anyway good job:)
E.Nelson chapter 25 . 8/3/2011
Amazing story so far. I'm glad that you're continuing it! :)

These past couple of chapters have kept me on the edge - update soon!
AshTempest chapter 25 . 8/1/2011
Oh No!

Please No!

Derek's going to end up with her and Charlie's going to die!



Way to painfull for me to read that.

Guest chapter 25 . 7/30/2011
I love this story! I read the entire thing tonight (its 5am right now). Haha. But I honestly cant get enough of this story. I hope Bonnie ends up with Derek later on after shes okay with Charlie dying. I really dont want Charlie to die though! I love him.

Update soon!
AshTempest chapter 24 . 7/15/2011
I expected it all along! I like the way, you kept it long before Bonnie found out about his illness, it made it seem realistic. But what I don't like, is that your chapter was short, better make Chapter 25 a lengthy one!

Hope you update soon,

kodkvnnrjgn chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
This is really good so far! I really like the first few chapters. It may take me a while, but I plan to read the rest a.s.a.p :)
E.Nelson chapter 23 . 4/12/2011
Derek could throw everything he had ta her but she knew it wasn't him - did you mean at?

Very good chapter, I can't wait to read more! I dislike cliffhangers doe this reason :P

Keep up the good work!
E.Nelson chapter 22 . 3/30/2011
Amazing chapter, I can't wait to see how the party goes!

Funny reading this the day after my 17th birthday XD
junemarie.2012 chapter 21 . 3/22/2011
Ah it kept me on the edge sorta.

But it was good(:

update soon, pleasee?
E.Nelson chapter 21 . 3/21/2011
Intense chapter. I loved it, but hated it at the same time cause of the car /

Update soon, please?
swamp13 chapter 20 . 3/6/2011
lvee itt. please write moree ((:
E.Nelson chapter 20 . 3/6/2011
This chapter was really really really good :) Sad, but good. Keep up the good work, cause I'm looking forward to seeing the inevitable talk with Bonnie and Charlie :) I like the ending, how he pretty much saved her. And then how her mother and friend just listened to her, that was pretty amazing. I know, my mom can't go without interrupting me when I go to talk about things. I don't think she can resist it lol. But anyway, keep up the good work, and update soon? :)
AshTempest chapter 20 . 3/6/2011

"Bonnie-," he started to call out to her.

But Bonnie ignored him. She just kept on walking towards the door. Walking, wlaking, walking...


I hope he ran after her so they could SPEAK.

I'm sure they did.

Why did you end the chapter with that?


It's been a prolong while since you have updated and when you finally did you cut through their romance, so we could wait till the NEXT chapter.

I demand more, in SHORT time please.

yours truly

~Ash :D
junemarie.2012 chapter 20 . 3/5/2011
Ah you need to update!

I really want to know what is wrong with Charlie.
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