I really hope you update ASAP. I've been reading your story the pas two days and I love it(:

wait, what happened! please update soon (:

I think I had a mini heart attack when I seen a new chapter alert in my inbox. :D

Short, but very good chapter. It's pretty realistic, and I felt bad for Bonnie :( Looking forward to seeing how everything plays out with her mother and how everything with Charlie goes.

Keep up the good work :)

This is a seriously brilliant story! I only meant to read a chapter or two, but I ended up reading the entire thing- and its awesome. I hope you update soon!

- Lorna

Gosh I absolutely adore this entire story! The descriptions are flawless, the characters are amazing, and the plotline is both suspenceful, great, and realistic. I love all the twists in this story and love your unique style of writing. I could definitely imagine seeing this in a bookstore someday! XD I can't wait until your next chapter! :D

Hey guys-

Just wanted to say a major thanks to all of you who have stuck with this story! You guys mean the world to me. I'm so sorry for being a horrible author :( I really do try to write but I get so sidetracked. Well, enjoy!

Please keep writing. it's getting good.

when i got to the end of this chapter, i was like no, there has to br another chapter so please write another one :D you are a very talanted writer to keep up the good work.

Dude. If Charlie dies from cancer or something, I'm gonna cry :'(

I lovee yourr storyy! (: its simply, for the lack of a better word, AWESOME! (x lol HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON! (: PLEASE!

omgness... i'm like balling like a baby rite now! ): lol this is such a great story! (: can't wait to finish it! (:

OMGosh! Shah I love it :) I think I know what wrong with Charlie but imma not gonna say ;) hehe update ASAP!

ok, NO offense, i totes like this story, BUT it sounds a bit too much like a walk to remember, except vice-versa. NO OFENSE! but it does.

but i still cant wait for more!

and i'm guessing charlie's secret is cancer.

good job!

You're really keeping the suspence going nicely, with the whole Charlie's sickness and Derek's, well, jerk-ness. (: I like it a lot so far, and am looking forward to reading more! Like I've said before, just try to reread for small spelling errors. Other than that, Keep up the good work! (:

-Emalee

damnn! i can't believe derek would actually come up with such a lie.

but please update soon!

i want to know what is wrong with Charlie!

(:

-june