Amazing chapter. It was worth waiting for, but I'm dying to know what's wrong with Charlie! I can't wait for your next chapter. The only advd I can think to give is to reread your work and go into a little more detail on things. (:

Please update soon!

the chapter was good, i'm still kinda wondering what Charlie is hiding!

Again Updatee soon!

-june

You better Update the next chapter soon.

By soon, I meant tommorow or something that is simmilar to it!

Sadly I though you quit writting it. I gasped when I saw the Alert.

I can tell you already have written 'Chapter Eighteen'.

It's the last to words posted on Chapter Seventeen ;)

Gotcha.

~Ash

Cute! Bonnie's in for a challenge. Please be sure to read my story too! I'll keep reviewing!

love it plz ud soon :D

This is absolutley amaizing.

I love this, but my heart ached for charlie.

What I'm scared for is that he's dangerously ill and he wont live. It would be too painful for me to read as that happen.

So do tell okay?

I just hope there is a happy ending btween them.

~Ash

this chapter was awesome!

i'm still clueless to what Charlie's secret is!

please update soon!

-june(:

i read all 15 chapters in one day! thats how GOOD your story is! (:

please update soon!

i wonder what Charlie has to tell Bonnie?

i love it!

-june

I FREAKEN LOVE THIS STORY! I READ ALL THE CHAPTERS IN ONE DAY WELL IF THREE HOURS MAYBE :p MY POINT IS THIS IS AMAIZING, i hope you dont mind if i become ur reader? please do tell me if you do mind. :)

One thing I have to say is, reread your work ] You've got a couple gramar mistakes.

Next, Pupils cannot get red unless you've got contacts ] It's your eye whites that get red when you cry.

Other than that, it's a really good story so far and I look forward to reading more :)

{Didn't sign in to post this, so I put my username as the name XD}

-Emalee

Hey i love this story and i was wondering if on the next chaptor you could say when you update so i no when to check or could you email me at .uk i would really love if you took the time to do that. Also i would like to say that charlie is my favourite character ever because he is so kind and sweet to bonnie. Thank you if you do take the time and don't worry if you don't i will still read your story whenever i check x

Since I don't know how to reply to your reply *Sigh*, I'm going to post a review for this chapter... It won't let me again for 14 .

Anyway, you're welcome (: And I look forward to reading more. Charlie reminds me of my boyfriend quitee a bit (: It's kind of funny, actually. Though, Bonnie reminds me nothing of me except she tries to be nice to everyone.

Interesting :)

I enjoyed reading so far, it's a good read and it distracts me from my life at the moment :] Which is an accomplishment.

Haha.

Good job so far (:

This story is really good so far, but I suggest more detail on people or places.

Try to read over each chapter when you're done - there are a few misplaced words, I've seen.

Keep up the good work, I'm eager to read more (:

Alright, I'm stepping out of my little square reading this, as everything about the girl and her need for money kind of annoys me, as I'm one of the "loser" girls who sits by herself all the time.

When I first started reading this, I was confused as to what an iHome is, and I think I've figured out it's similar to an iPod. (:

You could have gone into more detail about the fight. It was good and everything, but more detail would be nice (:

Also, could you describe Eric and her surroundings wherever she is a little more? :]

Other than that, this story is progressing nicely :] The end of this chapter was quite cute, I must admit.

Keep up the good work :]

you should really update really soon!

i love this story!

its really good.

-june