This is absolutely amazing. It's so good. I couldn't stop reading. I got where the (main) boy was coming from...

Soundtrack suits it so well :P

this is very very beautiful

you write with so much emotion

Lovely, absolutely lovely. Wish there were more.

Man, this was real cute. At the start I really liked the lack of dialog but towards the end I kinda got lost with the italics. Storys' well done :D

B.F.

Oh, I love this! You know I do.

It's so realistic, so beautiful, so the way I wish it were in reality.

Awsome to see you write again even if it was just on old piece. All pieces from you are good pieces and I'll be your spell/grammar check anyday!

Love

I like it; it's different but good.

Keep on writing :)