Reviews for Wasteland |
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![]() ![]() ![]() huh... very acurate, i like it _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job on this. The prespective is great. It could use a little grammar, but then again the who 'capitals rare' add to the effect so it's really up to you. I like the concept, that under the bleachers is a wasteland. I'd always thought of the world above the bleachers as a wasteland, and it's nice to look at it the other way every once in a while. It's an interesting take on things. Great essay- I enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha, this is a depressing view of teenagers, yet one I can't help but laugh at, and agree with a little bit. I like how you described everything in this scene, from the people above to the people below, those in front, all mixed up with these casual observations. Paints a grim portrait, in a nonchalant, almost objective kinda way. I particularly liked: 'An entire section full of Human Waste gives a standing ovation.' But this: 'eager to plant her uterus with her chosen male's sperm cells' doesn't make sense to me. In a visual way. The uterus wall is impregnated with the eggsperm cell... I think... wow so not the time or place for human dev refresher lol. So, nice one, all up. |