Reviews for Love, Gabriel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is just beautiful. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you tell this story. for some reason I feel very relaxed when reading this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're awesome. Marry me. Haha kidding. What that translates to is: Your writing is incredible. I really appreciate the amount of detail in this story. gabriel (with no caps) as a character is so interesting and I love the way he thinks, because some of those thoughts are things I've thought about before but couldn't put into words. You're awesome. (: -PWB |
![]() ![]() ![]() I usually don't review stories until the end. But with this one, I feel like I sorta have to. What your doing with this story is marvelous. Please continue. It's a really great thing to read. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I do really love this. Keep on writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() First: You switched (in this chapter) from the present tense to the past tense, so that was a bit confusing, and there were some typos (e.g., 'I ask her where her mother packed her lunch' should be 'I ask her whether her mother packed her lunch.') Second: I really like your story! When I think that I've figured out Gabriel, you reveal a new aspect of him and that makes your story continually interesting. Third: Unrelated, but I've wanted to tell you for the last few chapters that you've got a fantastic taste in music. Therefore: Please keep writing!(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story. It's so depressing but sort of uplifting at the same time. Gabriel's such an interesting character. The way he acts around people reminds me of a kid with Asperger's syndrome or perhaps another form of Autism. I like that he doesn't really directly write about his sister's suicide, yet we can still see how it's affecting him. You've definitely got the showing and not telling thing down. I feel kinda sorry for Julia, although the way Gabriel writes about her you can see why he finds subtle things she does annoying. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. You're a talented writer, keep going ;) -Indie |
![]() ![]() I like this story very much! I think Paul is my favourite person, and I can't wait to find out what happens to gabriel. Keep writing! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is beautiful! so simple, so naive. please update. it's vastly different from anything i've ever read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I wonder what Paul's secret is? I'm still really enjoying this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() your story makes me feel sad, but a little comforted at the same time. I enjoy your style, and the way you portray gabriel, and all the phrases that catch me just the right way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you read 'The Perks of Being a Wallflower'? Because this really reminds me of it. I'm not sure why gabriel always spells his name with a lowercase 'g', but I think it's interesting that he does. Anyway, your story is so good! :D Please keep writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really interesting. I like it! I'm surprised that there aren't any other reviews. I really like your style of writing. |