|Reviews for Again|
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Very interesting way of writing it.
All broken up, with italics.
The way that you did.
Sort of gave this amazing effect of falling, and losing your stomach up in your throat somewhere. So many wonderful descriptions, that arent all pretty or soft, it gave the poem a good texture.
And the message behind it was kind of unexpected in a way, but mainly not. Because we all know what was being spoken of, just that it was delievered in a slightly different way.
| Broken Winged Bird chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
I know EXACTLY how this feels... this is what happened to me last summer. That boy from the poem of mine you reviewed was the only thing that was strong enough to get me over someone I loved but was only ever hurt by.
This is amazing. I love the way the second to last stanza just seems like an attack of words describing the feeling, because it matches up so well with how it actually happens in life.