Reviews for You Just Don't Want to Live Next Door to One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is very interesting! I hope you update it soon! |
![]() ![]() Guessing that Raif is a vampire, you haven't said that yet but the signs are all there. Would love to see what happens in the next chapter, so please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I guessed Raif was a vamp from when we first saw him... but he's just so different from all the typical vampires that it'd be hard to ever guess. You haven't said yet that he is, but I'm going to take a wild guess from the warnings and how he only goes out at night. It was just strange how he looks so sickly and how he was practically dying in the washroom. Strange yet it was definitely part of what captured my interest for Raif. :D It's hilarious how George and Parker call him dead. Ahahahahaha. I do hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() don't refuse the offer! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing is wonderful. Simple, clever and eloquent. You've also managed to set up a very intriguing (and creepy) mystery. Kudos for your restraint, not spilling the beans on Raif in the first paragraph. Furthemore, your descriptive language and characterisation are wonderful - both Raif and Parker are well-developed, clear characters. I hope you update because I'm really enjoying this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. So different from Abe and Steve but just as good. I like Raif, he's a devious so-and-so. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm ... is Parker being stalked by vampire hunters? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I quite like Raif actually. Gnomes are quite creepy though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who's doing it? This is cool suspense! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm delighted, more garden gnomes! But rest assured, I love the story as well, the gnomes are just a bonus. It's all so exciting, I'm intrigued beyond words. Anticipating the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cool story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it so far! Can't wait for you to update. ~Raven |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving this story to bits. Raif is really amusing. And I'm looking forward to the next chapter. lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, I love the garden gnome! Seriously, when I read the warning that there were to be garden gnomes in this story, I was immediately intrigued. I think I'm in love with the vicious little creature. It scares the shit outta me, and I appreciate that in a man/gnome. It triggers my fascination. So yeah, awesome story! Keep up the good work, and moar gnomes, plz. God, I must go buy one of my own. |
![]() ![]() Raif is by far my fave character. He is so different from all the other vamps you read nowadays and its so damn refreshing. |