interesting concept

Very interesting, but the likelihood of three mermen surviving outside of their natural aquatic habitat for more than 72 hours without sustaining serious damage to their health is extremely small.

I enjoyed it, this was funny! great story!

Absolutly beautiful. This is truely a fine work of art and I am sure that I will never forget it. I offer much love and wishes for good luck on future peices. ~bye bye~

I love it so far. Great job

What a cute ending to such a fun story. Dace is such a sweetheart. Did you every think of writing a sequel?

AW it's the end!

Yes. This story is, indeed, one of my favorites.

You're going to make me cry! It's over? Oh sadness! I'm glad it finished happily of course, but I guess the reader in me wanted there to be more. Thank you for replying to my silly reviews. I wish you luck with your project! Take care and thank you for taking me on this journey with you :)

~Sky~

I know I kind of disappeared on you for a while, but I must say that I enjoyed your story. Although there were times that I wish things were more graphic (what can I say, I'm a bit perverted like that), I think your story gives a nice, warm feeling. It wasn't too dramatic in terms of plot (by which I mean you didn't really go into "heavier" issues, such as the brothers' life before Morgan, etc.) but there were more than enough entertaining scenes to make up for it.

It's a bit sad to see the younger two brothers separated, but I'm glad that Dace and Morgan will finally have a more romantic relationship - and you finally revealed Dace's reaction to having his posterior fondled! XD

Thank you for writing such a lovely story.

Oh gosh! It's over? :( *sad face* I'm guessing your going to try for publication, hence that being why only so much of it could be posted online? I'm sad to see it go though... Like you wrapped it up, but there still seems to be more to tell! Lol. Anyways it was quite a good story. :) I'll try to check out your other stuff and I think we'll be on the look out for any new stuff from you. :)

Shintoshi! You're going to make me cry! Now I'm suffering from separation anxiety! Now I'm afraid that Dace will leave her too, but I hopefully doubt it since he likes being around Morgan so much. Kiyi on his own . recipe for disaster in my opinion. This chapter went super fast, like you crammed it all in too quickly. Are you trying to get to a conclusion soon? Why the rush darlin'!

~Sky~

Oh Gosh! NO! They're ALL leaving. I mean with Varden and Kiyi gone it could mean some possible "sexy time" for Dace and Morgan but at the same time, Dace will be all alone, and the house will seem empty again, and poor Morgan will have to go back to cooking! I'm happy for Varden though, since he seems so in love with Jessica, and I'm glad that Kiyi has something to keep him occupied, but I feel bad since he's the only one that doesn't have any romantic prospects, even though he seems to have absolutely no desire for one. I still think he'd want one... No one is that asexual as to where they don't even think about it at least sometimes. Maybe Kiyi is the exception though. No one knows but you... since you're the author and what not. lol. Thanks for the update though! Love that there's almost always one every week... how you find the time, I have no idea. My spare time is spent sleeping. lol. And you're welcome for the compliments. I'm not one to just give them out, they actually have to be earned, and you're story is definitely good enough for some. Besidses, if it was ever utter crap I'd be sure to tell you. :) OH and yeah... "On educating Children" sucks! I don't care if it is a "modern classic" according to Penguin books, it's still a freaking essay and as to how I'd educate the mer-men... well if I ever find one I'll be sure to tell you how that goes. ;D

Her boys are growing so fast. :)

I like reading about Varden, he's so funny.

And Dace is just so innocent! It's so adorable.

Kiyi is cool, i'm glad he found something to do!

This story is so unique, and I just love it soo much!

:]

It seems like forever since I got a chance to read this and you updated it many times since then. All great. When Jessica dissed Varden skills it made me laugh.