Reviews for Three Little Fish and a Bird
no-ones-puppet chapter 25 . 1/31/2011
ROTFLMAO. Varden never finished? lol. Wow... I mean, I figured that Jessica didn't but I didn't know that he didn't either. I'm assuming that blue balls suck so it probably wasn't any fun for him eiher. Now, on to this chapter! Dace is adorable... "Then… what do we have?" Oh so innocent you are! :) and you're right, Morgan should slip him some romance books... I'm sure she's written some herself or she probably has a stash somewhere that leans more towards the erotica side. Just guessing of course. ;) Oh and it was so cute how Dace ran off to Morgan's room when he needed to calm down... Makes me smile of course! Thanks for the lovely update... Now back to "On Educating Children" instead. I can assure you that it is a lot less interesting than your story. :)
Nelehania Sky chapter 24 . 1/25/2011
Aww *cries* I want mer-babies! I'm elated that Kiyi finally has a hobby though, no more mopey face! What did no-ones-puppet get? Oh no! I hate being out of the loop! . dang it now I'm going to have to re-read that chapter until I figure it out...or you can just tell me Shintoshi ;)

no-ones-puppet chapter 24 . 1/24/2011
Aww! Morgan's hopes and dreams have been dashed! But it'd be funny if Jessica suddenly wound up pregnant since I'm pretty sure she was too shocked by the tail to think of protection! Lol. Then we'd know for sure if the child would be sterile or not and if it's not, then Morgan and Dace have some hope, although Dace still seems super oblivious to the difference in how Morgan acts around him and how she acts around his brothers... Poor boy just seems to always have his head in a book. Morgan should tell him to come up for air every once and a while and experience life... especially with her! Lol. Looking forward to your next chapter... more interactions between Dace and Morgan please? :)
Nelehania Sky chapter 23 . 1/18/2011
Thank you for the well wishes I am up and functioning properly now! I'm glad your holidays were well :)now to the review haha! I feel terrible for Varden's pride being struck down in front of him, because it seems he had that going for him but is crushed by insults of his manhood. I can picture Kiyi returning to the Ocean due to boredom...and Dace just continuing to sleep next to Morgan. The quote "Life is good." I imagine a small child cuddled up close to his mother, eyes closed and a goofy grin. Makes me giggle inside XD

Mackenie Goodrich chapter 23 . 1/18/2011
Words of Wisdom: I don' get it.

Pro: Um... good chapter, loved the beginning with Dace (who is by fave, by the way)

Con: I don't understand by Varden being a dud. Was he like, not good in the sack? (;

All-in-All: Good, but I'm really confused.
no-ones-puppet chapter 23 . 1/17/2011
uh oh. I have a feeling Dace is going to get mad that Kiyi gets to go out and he has to stay at home. Although maybe Varden and Dace can get back into Morgan's "special" collection of movies to pass the time a little bit.

Oh and the reason that Varden was probably a dud was because all the women he had previously been with had been so drunk that nothing mattered right? lol.
Nelehania Sky chapter 22 . 1/12/2011
Hey Shintoshi! Sorry for not reviewing on the last chapter, I had surgery so I'm holed up in bed and now able to hold the computer on to my lap

I hope you had a lovely holiday, I know for one I am glad you have returned! Jessica is definitely my favorite type of character; Outgoing with a business/sexy attitude and says what's on her mind. Oh Varden naughty naughty fishy, he just can't help himself can he haha! I am looking forward to the new Chapter! I want to know what Dace and Morgan are up to ;)

Mackenie Goodrich chapter 22 . 1/11/2011
Words of Wisdom: Is Varden retarted?

Pro: Um, this was fantastically written so yay!

Con: The only issue I see here is that for the length of time it takes for you to update, your chapters are short and sometimes very unsatisfying.

All-in-All: Great chapter, but I wish it was longer.
M chapter 2 . 1/11/2011
1. She's treating him like a science project.

2. Fish kind of need to stay in water or they dry out.
no-ones-puppet chapter 22 . 1/10/2011
Bahaha! The dinner scene made me laugh so much because after reading about how "vocal" jessica was it got me thinking. Lol. Maybe it's not Varden she should be worried about. I'm a strange one though... And you did tell me to assume it's supposed to be naughty, even if you hadn't realized it could be taken that way. :)

Another excellent chapter though... Despite it's shortness. But I assume you have an actually life so I will not begrudge you this, instead I will thank you for actually taking the time to write your stories down and share them with us. Looking forward to your next update and I might have to go check out that forum of yours. :)
Lustful Muse chapter 22 . 1/10/2011
Now that Jessica's mentioned it, it would be interesting if Morgan inquired more into the brother's life in the lake.

Also, I like the way Dace answered the question about how long they've been together (since Morgan injured him - lol).

"You a snitch?" "" - I really like these lines XD

Wow. Jessica just goes for it huh? Oh well (since Varden does too). But it's weird how she doesn't have much of a reaction...

Thanks for the update (I don't really mind that it's sort) (_)v
no-ones-puppet chapter 21 . 1/6/2011
So I just finished reading all your chapters... Sorry I didn't comment on every single one but I tend to wait until I get to the end to review. I have to say... My favorite chapter by far was 20? The one with the porn. Lol. You're little comment about Dace being the "big brother" made me laugh so much... Not sure f you were intending for it to be a reference to his size, by I took it that way. Lol. Anyways I really like the story so far... And I can't wait to see what will happen with Jessica there. Especially concerning Varden: :)
Lustful Muse chapter 21 . 1/3/2011
"Swatting Varden as he wiggled too and fro in an attempt to mimic the strippers from some of her private collection" - ha! I like this but I wonder, were the strippers male or female? ;)

Yay! Dace will finally be back in Morgan's bed (precisely where he belongs).

Gah! You're so sly, keeping me in suspense by withholding what'll happen later that night. (*sigh*) Oh well, thanks for the update and I look forward to the next! I'll also have to check out that nifty forum you made...
Lustful Muse chapter 20 . 12/8/2010
"Box?" he asked, his tail moving to and fro in anticipation. "Filled with books? Oh! Those colorful candies?" - I really like the image of his tail moving as well as the thought of him being excited to find a box full of box or skittles. So cute! (o_o)

Dace certainly was the big brother, and putting into practice what he had learned at the lab - lol! I really like this too ;)

Thinking it unfair were she to not use corporal punishment on Dace as well, she got behind him and gave him a single spank, chastising herself for adding a notable fondling to the act. - I like how forward Morgan is. I just wish I knew how the three brothers felt about this kind of treatment. For example, I know Varden would love it, but does Dace (or Kiyi for that matter) even realize that Morgan is attracted to them? I would like to see more reactions from them (please).

When they opened the box and were watching porn, I was kind of hoping that it was Morgan's home-made sex tapes (preferably ones that she had made with Ryan) - that would have been truly priceless.

I'm eagerly waiting for more intimate scenes between Morgan and each of the three brothers (although, as you already know, I have a soft spot for Dace particularly...). I wonder if they'll also begin to show a desire for her attention more exclusively... (I hope so!).

Anyways, thanks for the update! It's really fun reading your story and also when you respond to reviews!

Nelehania Sky chapter 20 . 12/7/2010
Shintoshi! You can't leave me like this, I'll go through withdrawals! Nonetheless I hope you have a wonderful break :)

I'm glad that you finally exposed the contents of the mysterious box. Oh Dace, Dace, Dace clearly is the favorite :P ah hell, he's my favorite too. I told myself I wasn't going to pick one..but I broke down. Happy Holidays!

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