Reviews for Firm Place to Stand
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
This was very beautiful, the emotion was so strongly transferred to the reader that it gave me goosebumps.

The format is fine, interesting idea to put the lines this way. Every word felt emphasized.

Fave lines:

"She's spitting fingernails from her lips like sunflower seeds

She chews the ridge of her thumb like year old chaw"

Great opening lines, I wonder why only 1 person reviewed this poem...I loved it~ :D
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
This is just AMAZING!

I love the format, word choice, imagery, rhyme scheme.

Wow! This left an image in my mind. Favorite :D