Reviews for whirl
nickyO chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
What I like about this one is that the reader can add as much feeling/angst as he/she wants to, to it. I can think about the broken branch like a broken heart or relationship, think about the dried water puddles as a desert once full of life-then again, I can think about the dried puddles as dried tears, the broken branch as fallout from trouble that has past, the branch only a piece of the tree; then again, I can simply take it all at face value and think about change in general, the movement of the creek. Very Good. Love it.
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Ich bin immer wieder erstaunt, was du aus dem einfachen Haiku-Schema machst

Viele liebe Grüße und schöne Feiertage

Franziska