Reviews for Untitled 2
abstractedcandy chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
I loved it, but it would be better if you took out the word "truest" in the last line, since it makes the poem not flow that well. Just a suggestion :) Great job!
Sasue chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
NICE. I just wish it was a little bit longer, you know? ]
Genzetsubou chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
I think you did a good job here. You get your meaning across very clearly and make the most out of the four lines that you have.