|Reviews for Blood Pet|
| Twinkers chapter 29 . 3/6
I just read all 29 chapters straight through! I AM HOOKED! But now there is no more to read so pretty please update soon -C
| Guest chapter 29 . 2/21
Please update again. I miss this story.
| Asia chapter 29 . 1/15
Noooooo! Please update!
| Asia chapter 7 . 1/11
I know this most likely won't happen, but please let her beat him. Or at least wound him. The sadistic perv is seriously an arse.
| Guest chapter 29 . 1/4
Dizzy Disowned here!
I am far up lazy to log in but I really hope you pick up and finish this story! Its really really good and I would love love lloooooovvee to read the rest!
| Saloni chapter 29 . 10/27/2013
Really nice story!
| Saloni chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
This sounds really interesting!
| Alaeryel chapter 29 . 10/24/2013
CONGRATULATIONS Sarah on both of the teaching jobs as the sub and for this year! You may not have liked this chapter much BUT I SURE AS HELL DID! I think you did a GREAT JOB myself and it would figure someone would have poisoned her (Annabelle) before the fight but I still think Jessica handled herself PRETTY DAMN WELL! I did nearly faint when she attacked her mother though! I also apologize for the late reading of this-health issues, vacation and chaos reigned for awhile and I do know you will be quite busy BUT I will be watching for more whenever you have the opportunity to write more!
| rhi-shi chapter 29 . 9/4/2013
dun dun daaaa xD I hate cliff-hangers so much
| friesianone chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
I just read the prologue- and wow! I'm in love! The writing is very sensual and gorgeous! Not to mention very realistic! Must read more! D
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/8/2013
This story is too repetitive - neither character is changing at all. Thanks for sharing your work though.
| Guest chapter 29 . 7/14/2013
Loving your amazing writing skills. Great style and it's fast moving. Fillers are necessary in some stories but yours has a great smooth flow. Can't wait for the next update!
| AkeraWriterOfTheNight chapter 29 . 7/7/2013
Oh come on! Your stoping now? I willrevoice my previuse offer, if yougave writer's block come to me.
| SolanaNight chapter 29 . 7/3/2013
I'm going to start by saying wow. I am thoroughly impressed. I'm been scanning around for awhile now trying to find a good read only to come up short, so imagine my delight to stumble upon this. :3 For the last couple of days I haven't been able to stop reading until I read through your latest update.
First off, I'd like to praise you for your proper use and understanding of grammar. It seems that lately people have been viciously abusing the English language with their writing. I don't doubt that people have great ideas for plots and storylines, however, I find it impossible to read a work that doesn't even have proper capitalization and punctuation. So props to you for earning this grammar Nazi's stamp of approval. :P
Next, I'd like to compliment you for defying the norm and not caring what people think. Not enough people write dark literature partly for the fear of offending people. It's a shame because although it's dark, it's more realistic since the real world is dark and twisted whether people like to admit that or not.
Finally, I really tip my hat off to you for showing that vampires are not these fairy tale storybook characters that sweep people off their feet. They're dangerous blood-thirsty creatures and should be treated as such. Although Tristan has romantic feelings for Jessica, his predatory and dominating nature still shines through every now and then like when he's referring to the takeover of the world.
You really had me getting into the story. You had me shivering and even tearing up a bit. Which doesn't happen very often, mind you. However, I feel a need to give some constructive criticism because no matter how well-written a story might be, there's always room for improvement.
There was only really one thing I didn't like too much, and it isn't even that big of a deal. I didn't like how Jessica constantly explains herself and arguments over and over again. The problem itself doesn't lie with the repetition because repeating yourself is a very human thing to do. However, in a story, it can become irritating when thoughts are repeated with the same phrase or word choices. Which happened quite a bit throughout the story. Like I said, this is a relatively minor thing, but I think it's something to keep in mind.
The other point I have isn't really so much a criticism as it is a suggestion. Your images are fairly clear so I get a proper visual of what's going on and what the setting looks like, but perhaps you should try adding just a tad bit more color to your descriptions with more adjectives and figurative language. Just a little bit more. You don't want to add too much as to go overboard, but I think it would give the story more flavor. Like adding salt.
All in all, I really enjoyed this work. You're doing a fantastic job, and I hope your busy schedule clears enough to get the updates sooner if that's not too selfish to hope for. :P
| Jae chapter 29 . 7/2/2013
Yay! Thank you sooo much for updating! I'm in love with Tristan.
Also, congratulations on the job and apartment!