HOT. Good job! :D

*drools slightly* That was hot.

just a few pointers. you have them doing things that would require them to hold their breath under water. they are still in the hot tub, so Logan would have to hold his breath in order to lick Dylan's hips and chest. overall a good story, though you can't really tell if they have had sex before or if this is their first time. i hope to see more of your writing down the line.

good luck!

Its actually cum and cumming, besides that, its perfect.