Reviews for Gir's Easter
CallumJB chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
Loved it. I have absolutely no criticism at all. I love how happy the endings of your stories are.

"and then Jake the Snake went home to see his friends"

"And then slept happily with dreams full of waffles" etc

It's a triumph.


xJadeRainx chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
I can't help but think this was based on invader Zim. Gir does love his waffles, they have peanuts and soap in it!

Anyway, this was a good attempt! Keep writing.

juliegirl10 chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
The only problem with this story is that its too short, Some questions

* was there any other challenges beside the Easter egg hunt?

* How many Kids were there?

* Why does he love waffles so much?

* Is this based on any of your friends, Family?

You might want to include some more detail, But as a short story, I Like it :D