|Reviews for Cross my heart|
| WhiteSand chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I like the lines "Pandora's box shut with shadows" and the first stanza. I do wonder, what are these secrets being alluded to? It must be something pretty good! It has a nice musicality too.
| Subbie chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
Wow... amazing :) I can relate, and this is amazing. :D
| Happy to be Mad chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
This is exceptionally well written.
Just a few little things; you need to work on the format of your piece, some of the lines need to be broken up and you should uses capitals at the start of each line.
| salt pillar chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
I give it 5.
Normally I hate poetry, but I actually like this.
The world is officially ending...