Reviews for Cross my heart
WhiteSand chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I like the lines "Pandora's box shut with shadows" and the first stanza. I do wonder, what are these secrets being alluded to? It must be something pretty good! It has a nice musicality too.
Subbie chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
Wow... amazing :) I can relate, and this is amazing. :D
Happy to be Mad chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
This is exceptionally well written.

Just a few little things; you need to work on the format of your piece, some of the lines need to be broken up and you should uses capitals at the start of each line.
salt pillar chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
*jaw drops*

I give it 5.

Normally I hate poetry, but I actually like this.

The world is officially ending...

Must. Favorite.