Reviews for When Lies Become The Truth |
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![]() ![]() that is a really good story please continue i loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing, truly great! Are you going to write more? Cause i would love to read more! :D |
![]() ![]() Great job! I love your fic, especially how it tells a different story than most teacher/student fics. I also like the attraction Mr. Harkness holds for Elizabeth and the steamy passion amidst the innocence. An innocent girl held captive and helpless by the mad clutch of passion and the expert touch of a man is always rather... tittilating... Also, the burst of passion out of nowhere was amazing and went well with the internal struggle of 's departure. It let's readers know that you're capable of writing some serious smut and satisfies the urges of some readers who are looking for more risqué scenes but also that you're serious about the plot and not just some hot sex, though that is always nice. |
![]() ![]() hi, i'm reviewing before i've read your story hehe its a little unusual i know, but i just wanted to know wether or not you've modelled 'Mr Harkness' on Captain JAck HArkness from Torchwood? If not then please excuse me, but there is a strange similarity about the two... |
![]() ![]() Hey I love the elizabeth/Jack stories. are you going to be updating? please update lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah...that is sexy time! :) totally sympathise with elizabeth. i have to walk home all the time in my private school's uniform. which has a multi-coloured blazer! also, your love for byron knows no bounds! he's your profile pic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! I guess she found the keys after all...LOL! Man I wished I had a teacher like Mr. Harkness haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh thank you a million again.. you humble and spoil me so much... Just thank you. :D Excellent development in the story by the way. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well then... This story seems interesting. I can't wait to see where you take it. I haven't read your other story, but I'll probably look into it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the little twist you put on this version of the story. The was he kinda walked away from her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe what she said about war... tut tut. :D And the ending... *swoons* he needs to have sex soon to relieve some of the sexual tension otherwise he is going to jump her in class. Haha. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh.. wow! More Mr Harkness. :D I like both versions of the story equally but I think the other version is more innocent and sweet. :D Please update either one soon! |