okay i like the whole flash back on topza's life and that really seem great. I can't wait for more.

so when the 2 boxes come in and after that, is that still in the past or is it in the furture, cause topaz said he was getting better, but now it seems he just started fighting the problem, so is this in the past or present

Another great chapter i love the development with Rune and i love the negotiations and bonding between him and heather.

So is Rune, the mate of heather's mom?

are heather and rune going to have something? is there any love life for heather?

I love the story and things are getting great can't wait to read more!

I really loved the transformation that was briliant! I love the characters they seem so lively and fun. The storyline looks like it's going to be amazing!

I would have liked to know a little bit more about Heather's human life, her job, hobby, friends. Maybe just one normal day before this happened would have been nice, but it is fine as it is.

How do you say carlisle's name?

CAR-liz-ly?

CARL-is-lee?

Well this would really help me out alot with the story, thanks, and great job!

It's done, then. So sad...but such a good story! Thank you for sharing this, a new world view.

Oh Heck...this is terrible. I love this story, but a cliffhanger such as this will gnaw at me like...a rat!

Meow! (hurry!)

I have had a cat pee in my shoe...it is an awesome threat! What a lovely place to stop the story...ah-hem...for now. Still reading!

So...I'm looking at my cats...five of my eight fur-children are keeping me company here at my computer...and I wonder...do that celebrate Kitty Day of the Dead? I have two who could just possibly do acrobatics...but the other five would just be plump party animals...I have one 'kitten' and he's just a noob at everything.

Again...I love this story. I wanna do a tale about the Kansas chapter of changing cats!

What a novel...and well written...story! I'm a fan!

I love this! It reminds me of one of my favorite authors. Keep writing you are really good.

i really liked this!

great writing style and a strange and unique idea! it's pretty good, you're one of the few that have something original

at first, i didn't get it but at the end of the chapter-i got fascinated by these unusually real characters..they're very realistic and well-developed

the only thing that mildly bothered me and didn't allow me to really get in into the story was the punctuation. you use it wrongly or when it's not needed. for example: blah instead of : so, blah blah

Wow. I'm so glad I found this story- it's amazing. Seriously, Your writing is amazing, the plot is original and gripping, and I can't tell you how refreshing it is to read something that isn't about vampires. Keep up the good work!

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aw! I love Heather and Rune! good work! I like it!

awawwh! lol! I love Rune with Heather! and Topaz with Carlisle! :) good work! I really love this story!

oh I like it! great work! Update soon!