Reviews for Hell
RenRen Eli chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
I like your style; you know, the way you play with words on this. It's a small piece of literature but you had said a lot along your descriptions. Smoking, is it? Amazing way of description. I like you.
Nick Ransom chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
Haha, oh can I relate...I'm really starting to like how you write, you've got this sarcastic overtone that I love. Something about the line "Exhaling the subtle gray air", I really like it.
Whaaoouusses chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
I love your view on smokes. Totally agree with it :)
J. Ganey chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
an awesome first person narrative.