Reviews for The Last Person I Expected To Love
HPRK08 chapter 2 . 5/19/2010
Sounds nice, but the whole mom-talking-about-something-going-on-between-Chrissy-and-Damien thing is weird. I mean, if they're about to become step-siblings, then wouldn't that be incest? And why would her mom be encouraging incest-ness? [That's not a word. :P] Just a question.

Otherwise, great work, captivating story you've got here!

~~HPRK
CONVERSEically Obsessed chapter 17 . 5/16/2010
lol the badrom scene was kinda funny!
DayDreamer 69 chapter 17 . 5/16/2010
Love it! haha yes it is quite funny lol

I feel sorry for Emma... but stil her and Jared shouldn't have used Chrissy like that, it wasn't fair.

The whole Mr Adams thing is a great twist but id love it if Chrissy and Damien got together :)

Great job anf good luck with finals :)

Post more soon
jodiggity chapter 17 . 5/16/2010
Haha when you put

~me and then added that you didn't feel like adding your name or username it just made it longer haha just thought I point that out. Well anyway I can't wait till damien and Chrissy end up together ;D haha
killerqueen123 chapter 17 . 5/16/2010
i'm loving this story. It's hilarious and weird. but i must say i absolutely love Will he is awesome
smileinthemira chapter 16 . 5/14/2010
oh :) haha nice
DayDreamer 69 chapter 16 . 5/14/2010
Absolutely A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! I read all the chapters today! I'm hooked. This is great!

I hate Jared! He's a creep, along with Emma...

I absolutely LOVE Damien! He's fantastic!

And Mr Adams... im not sure what i thin of him... hes hot! But still...

Update soon!
Storm Nelson chapter 16 . 5/13/2010
love it! o is christina subconcenciously going out w/ the principal to get back at damian? hm i cant wait to read more
CONVERSEically Obsessed chapter 16 . 5/12/2010
EW! Gross! No! Bad Christina! Damn I want her to like Damien already! if they would just stop being so stubborn and admit they like each other already.. i mean Damien broke up with his GIRLFRIEND for her! And shes just... GARG! I'm annoyed... in a good way... i dont want to get what i want right now if that makes any sense whatsoever lol... Anyways keep on with the story please.

Annoyed in a good way,

Epic
jodiggity chapter 15 . 5/9/2010
Oh my Gawd! This is really good. I had a longer review written up but it got deleted, Sorry! But update really soon pleaassee!
Raised with Fangs chapter 15 . 5/9/2010
hahaha, god this is hilarious!you's think it's about time they start realising that they love each other... duh! update quickly!
SingingSorrows chapter 15 . 5/8/2010
I really like your story! You're a great writer. Ha, I remember when I discovered the line thing; it made things a whole lot easier. :D Nothing's really wrong with your story... there are a few spelling errors though...but I think that they just might be because you left a letter off or something - nothing too serious.

Anyway, update soon!
smileinthemira chapter 15 . 5/8/2010
haha this is good update soon :)
Storm Nelson chapter 15 . 5/8/2010
this is an awesome story, i cant wait to read more _
the youth gone wild chapter 14 . 5/2/2010
i like it! write more and post please, i really wanna see how this works out
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