Reviews for Cinderfella
camikaza chapter 3 . 12/4/2011
Ah! I see it's been a while since your last update but still it's worth a try! I really love your story, and please go on! 3
MacyGrahm chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Nice story, keep going!

I feel like I've read this before, or something similar. It's good though!
RokitToMars chapter 3 . 6/6/2010
Aww, Camlin has a heart.

But ohmigod a date with Elizabeth.

*shudders*

Can I ask you a huge mongous favor?

We got the patrician type description of Camlin, but what dies Moss look like?

Just out of curiousity.

Well, til next!
RokitToMars chapter 2 . 6/6/2010
Ahahaha, and the fun ensues.

Soo, are 15 year olds from private schools really like that?

If so, ew public school for me XD
RokitToMars chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Hmm, first of all love the story name.

And your characters. They seem so narmal and real it's funny.

Camlin seems a bit pompous and Moss pulls of dysfunctional really well, I love it (:

We shall see how this goes.
crystal balle chapter 3 . 5/1/2010
This is such a great story! I love Camlin, even if he is a snob, and I love Moss, too! I can't wait for another update!
Reiki Convulsion chapter 3 . 4/24/2010
I really like this storyline! The next chapter should be good, what with Camlin's room getting some attention, hopefully by Moss, hehe

Seriously though, I really like your characters. And the part where Camlin made sure Moss and his mother wasn't thrown out was really cute. I suppose Moss will be questioning Camlin about that later, won't he, *wink, wink*

~Reiki
Serene Dust chapter 3 . 4/24/2010
I love love love love this story. :D AMAZING. Can't wait for more.
Serene Dust chapter 2 . 4/24/2010
Haha. I love this story!
Serene Dust chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
I love how Camlin is a bastard. :D
annouska chapter 2 . 4/20/2010
Brilliant start to the chapter, the bed scene and all !I could practically see it, in my head! And I can totally imagine Moss' annoyance when he had to serve those people. You portray all characters very well. All in all, I found it very well written!
Torah Cabernet chapter 2 . 4/19/2010
can't say enough how much I'm already enjoying this story. I like Moss quite a bit, Camlin, though he's a stuck up prick, is adorable, and is it bad that I think Moss' mother is awesome. Spits in their drinks? I've done that before :)

I can see the sexual tension (or is it frustration?) between the two of them. Things are starting to heat up, yes?

Write on, I like this story.

~(a very sleepy) Torah
annouska chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
A very promising start to the story! Both Moss and Camlin are interesting characters. Camlin seems like a conceited git, but I'm pretty sure there's more to him than that! Moss is very interesting as well, I really like his whole background, and I've had my pride bruised like he did many a time, so I can relate! All in all, I'm really looking forward to reading more of this!
caelum chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
nice story so far, looking forward to reading more
Emo Stardust chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
:D I can't tell you how happy I am that you put this back up! I was so saddened when you took it down before. I never thought I'd see the day when Camlin and Moss came back!
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