Reviews for Cinderfella |
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camikaza chapter 3 . 12/4/2011 Ah! I see it's been a while since your last update but still it's worth a try! I really love your story, and please go on! 3 |
MacyGrahm chapter 1 . 7/17/2010 Nice story, keep going! I feel like I've read this before, or something similar. It's good though! |
RokitToMars chapter 3 . 6/6/2010 Aww, Camlin has a heart. But ohmigod a date with Elizabeth. *shudders* Can I ask you a huge mongous favor? We got the patrician type description of Camlin, but what dies Moss look like? Just out of curiousity. Well, til next! |
RokitToMars chapter 2 . 6/6/2010 Ahahaha, and the fun ensues. Soo, are 15 year olds from private schools really like that? If so, ew public school for me XD |
RokitToMars chapter 1 . 6/6/2010 Hmm, first of all love the story name. And your characters. They seem so narmal and real it's funny. Camlin seems a bit pompous and Moss pulls of dysfunctional really well, I love it (: We shall see how this goes. |
crystal balle chapter 3 . 5/1/2010 This is such a great story! I love Camlin, even if he is a snob, and I love Moss, too! I can't wait for another update! |
Reiki Convulsion chapter 3 . 4/24/2010 I really like this storyline! The next chapter should be good, what with Camlin's room getting some attention, hopefully by Moss, hehe Seriously though, I really like your characters. And the part where Camlin made sure Moss and his mother wasn't thrown out was really cute. I suppose Moss will be questioning Camlin about that later, won't he, *wink, wink* ~Reiki |
Serene Dust chapter 3 . 4/24/2010 I love love love love this story. :D AMAZING. Can't wait for more. |
Serene Dust chapter 2 . 4/24/2010 Haha. I love this story! |
Serene Dust chapter 1 . 4/24/2010 I love how Camlin is a bastard. :D |
annouska chapter 2 . 4/20/2010 Brilliant start to the chapter, the bed scene and all !I could practically see it, in my head! And I can totally imagine Moss' annoyance when he had to serve those people. You portray all characters very well. All in all, I found it very well written! |
Torah Cabernet chapter 2 . 4/19/2010 can't say enough how much I'm already enjoying this story. I like Moss quite a bit, Camlin, though he's a stuck up prick, is adorable, and is it bad that I think Moss' mother is awesome. Spits in their drinks? I've done that before :) I can see the sexual tension (or is it frustration?) between the two of them. Things are starting to heat up, yes? Write on, I like this story. ~(a very sleepy) Torah |
annouska chapter 1 . 4/15/2010 A very promising start to the story! Both Moss and Camlin are interesting characters. Camlin seems like a conceited git, but I'm pretty sure there's more to him than that! Moss is very interesting as well, I really like his whole background, and I've had my pride bruised like he did many a time, so I can relate! All in all, I'm really looking forward to reading more of this! |
caelum chapter 1 . 4/10/2010 nice story so far, looking forward to reading more |
Emo Stardust chapter 1 . 4/10/2010 :D I can't tell you how happy I am that you put this back up! I was so saddened when you took it down before. I never thought I'd see the day when Camlin and Moss came back! |