|Reviews for Jaded Youth|
| Olivia chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
This is pretty true. The youth would probably care more about politics if those in charge didn't keep jerking them around. The media constantly patronizes "the youth of today." We aren't stupid. We know they aren't taking us seriously, and it's insulting.
Mechanics wise, using the word "beeswax" twice threw me off...I feel that the narrator who constantly says fuck and bullshit would use a stronger word than beeswax.
Also, I LOVED the couplet at the end. If you ever re-write this in any way please, please have it end the same way.