Reviews for Girl in Picture Eats Peach
Postscript624 chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
/ Will I go on break, or will I finish my peach and eat another one, or will I just stay in the same position, eating the same peach, forever? It's a moot point really, because if you come back to look at me one day, I'll still be taking a bite out of some peach, sloppily or neatly or however you imagine me doing so./

I feel like those two lines are sort of unnecessary, because you ask a question and then immediately answer it.