Reviews for Anthony Tyler Moore |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yikes! Pregnant in College. That's a lot to handle. I like angry vengeful Christine too. |
![]() ![]() Will you ever update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() maybe i am the only one who still on Anthony's side. haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update! I need your updaaaaate! :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice work, thunder. Lol I don't even know which side am I now.. :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gosh. Anthony is sweet. I like this soft side of his |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm.. pretty interesting Anthony. So he also has a desirable soft side in his personality. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This should be interesting. Anthony has much to reveal, ei? Cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gosh. Another intense chapter. I can really feel the sensation going on. :))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm I wonder what Anthony's feeling are for Christine. I mean, I guess he would have some feelings for her, but he must have been mighty stupid to keep sleeping with girls if he did have feelings for her. Sigh. I wouldn't mind learning more about what's going on in both Seth and Anthony's heads! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oiiiii so many good but unfinished stories out there. I am awaiting your updates! :D Anthony... he's really unbelievable. Why keep a girlfriend if you can't keep it in your pants? And for three years? Ridiculous. And him saying that he won't be honest with her if she isn't honest with him? Dude. You have three years of honesty to make up for. I really don't like him. I'm sure he has good attributes in other areas, but he's such a douche. Guh. |
![]() ![]() why is Christine such a floozy? it's remarkably difficult to like or sympathize with her when she's being so disrespectful to herself. Seriously. Her boyfriend of 3 years cheats on her and the most she can do is act out like a middle schooler, almost sleep with his best friend(on several occasions) , completely disregard the betrayal of trust by former bf and then almost sleep with him the first chance he seems interested. I'm in high school and I've made better calls then her. Really. Although, i don't have a problem with either of the male leads. They both seem to have their own stuff going on with them; and Anthony, cheater or not, has some major issues. Christine's a bipolar biznatch, still. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No not Anthony. Team Seth all the way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait for next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wanna know what's ridiculous? I JUST NOW started reading this flipping awesome story. Gawd, I'm so glad to have found this story! I was getting bored with everything else on the site :/ I'm a writer here myself, so I know that a writer doesn't want to hear "omg your story is so hawt please update or I'll die." Writers want to know what the reader thinks about it, what characters they tabor, what they think should happen. At least, I do. So here's my opinion. Anthony was a HUGE dick. But Seth is a complete stranger. It would be much more intriguing, I think, to gradually reveal the source of Anthony's issues. To make someone who was 100% loathed at the beginning become desirable again. That would be a truly artistic way to approach this story, if you could properly address the tension and anger (which I think you can!). I find myself wanting to understand Anthony like Seth does, although at this point I still hats him... Seth is adorable but, as a stranger in Christine's life, he has little dimension in her eyes as of yet. And now I'm rambling. :P Great story and dont rush the writing. Awesome takes a while to conjure. |