Reviews for Right Off the Donkey
xDoubleU chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
That was so cute and funny!

I loved Adham :P and Ahmed XD I honestly didn't think that one of the stalkers would be so cute and awesome and chivalrous :P

The Chace turned out to be such a jerk! She should thank the donkey for doing what he did, for making her see The Chace's true colours. And it was probably so embarrassing for her D: To tell her crush about this hot guy and trying to talk to said hot guy only for him to turn into this jerk!

But you know, it was a happy ending, so :P (though there is this curious cheesy part of me that's wondering if they got married :D).

Haha, anyways. I loved the story, it was well written, and I liked the characters. (Adham sounds so cute~ ;D)

Bubbly Girl chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Haha! :) I was laughing the whole time that i read this! Great job! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl
JustPlainJane chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Hahaha! Sweet, fluffy and Hilarious! I love this oneshot :) It's good to know that there are other Arabs here (and muslims?) on FP. I really like the way you write and I hope you'll continue posting your original stories :)

Great job!
Power Rangers chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Haha. I just spent my summer in Egypt learning arabic, and I'd been feeling a little homesick from my holiday.

That was awesome, so I assume they go to an international school.

Koshary, I love the stuff!

The museum is so hot, they really need to air condition it and the mummy room does have an odd distinct smell.

like-diamonds chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
i loved it, loved it, loved it. witty, humorous, down to earth-my type of story. (God bless your sense of humor by the way, its some kind of beautiful. [bald, naked emo, lol, joke of the week i tell you])

i get the feeling that these trips were recounted from personal experience xD with the endless sweating(God i KNOW how you feel) but think of it this way-you guys actually get to GO on field trips, and i think you metioned the school actually pays for them? where i come from that's unheard of my friend, nearly taboo.

but anyway. it really was excellent (should i have expected less?) me thinks it should go on my favourites list, yeah? D


i saw another reviewer mention this, and i thought id say that i liked the little look into Egyptian culture too. its refreshing, you know? just different and nice.
jaliwo chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
I loved this one-shot. The reference to Monsters Inc was absolutely hilarious.

I rediscovered one of the reasons I love fictionpress: reading stories written by people from other countries. I loved reading about the setting in Egypt and the bits you threw in about Egyptian culture. Turns out we're all human after all. :)
goanywhere chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
J.Szewczuk chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
So I never read one-shots, but the title and summary of this one caught my eye right away and I found myself drawn to it.

The class status bit was great. It made me smile and laugh as I read it.

I’m sorry that Gossip Girl will never be the same for her again (

All in all… Great job!

Review courtesy of the Review Marathon. (Link in my profile!)
zakeeya chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
This was so so so sweet! AND FUNNY! I loved it. Espcially the whole mr. Shafie's Wfe part. And teh english swear words. too good.
MadCatta chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
...This is why Egyptians go to the Pyramids. We Brits, well, we're dying of heat when we're skiing.

And, y'know, the flight and carbon miles and money wouldn't really be that great...

Hah... the class-status thing... :D


"Fair and Lovely." That's why you make sure that your Dad has Gaelic origin. We met some people in France (English ones) and one looked at my mum with her tan, and then me with my whitey-white skin. She then asks if my dad is Scottish...

Oi! What's so great about being blonde? -.-

BRITISH ACCENTS! Wait... it's Irish I love... Aw :(

""Aw!"" I'd've done that! :D

AW! That was really cute! :D

You know, I'm going to vanish for a week again. I come back to 10 FanFictionFictionPress updates, two eps of new Dr Who, new series of Waterloo Road, and new series of Outnumbered. This day is going to be great!
KR chapter 1 . 4/8/2010

soo funny lol I loved it

yeah I know im bac at reviewing
readaholicxxx chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
haha this is such a sweet story...

I remember once I was in Libya and hit a tourist by accident and boy was he surprised when he discovered I could speak English just as good as him haha

your right it's such a bitch walking in the sand!
Lonzo chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
sealednectar chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Aww! This was so cute and brilliant. It was funny and unique. Great work!:)
cerulean-azure chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
awesome. Original and hilarious :D