For god's sake Chris, call in sick.

This was great, I really enjoyed it, there was a back story that is quite intriguing too.

Lots of fun,

Thanks for sharing,

DS

omg! I don't know how you can say that that isn't up to par with your normal writing. The detailing allowed me to know exactly what was going on, to imagine it exactly... I love it! It made it easier to read without so much confusion thinking about the positions. This is the perfect attention-catcher to open up into a story about these two! As if you don't have enough of those going right now. lol. I'm just saying, this is a strong possibility for the future :)I loved to see the tears in his eyes, the spooning nakie . C:!

Loved it. Not a terribly eloquent review, but I did :)

Amazing!

I love Adam!

That was the most lovable and very SEXY one-shot that I've read in this website. Great detail, no, perfect detail of the two's sex scene. I give it a 10/10 and an A. Perfect. _

I love it, I love it, I LOVE IT. That was *definitely* the hottest thing I've read in a LONG time.

*fans self*

Guh. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS. Lol.

Claira

Oh...my...God! I ABSOLUTELY...LOVED THIS STORY! It was the best slash story I have ever read! I absolutely LOVED all those hot, juicy details; I LOVE details like that. You an AMAZING writer! I just loved this! I cannot express how much I LOVED this! Keep up the AMAZING work!

i loved this. it was so sweet and brilliant.