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| perhaps then you'd notice me chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
i always feel some of the best work comes from that hazel time between sleep and awake. and some of the worst.
this however, does not belong to the latter.
[i hope you read that not. i often skip it, and then get confused. but i repeat, does not.]
it flows really quite well, and i do love the first two lines. the end is somewhat unexpected, but in a good way. it works really well.
keep it up :D