Reviews for Fear Journal
Mandisaurus-rex chapter 2 . 4/14/2010
Eww, that's gross ! Half eaten people? Hm, was Casey a vampire since she had no pulse? I dunno. Probably not P. Quite a creepy story though! Really well written
ranDUMM chapter 2 . 4/14/2010
Hey,

Oh my gosh, that was actually really scary :/ She's some supernatural cannibal. Oh gross, dead people half eaten... That's seriously scary. Great work with this! There was a spelling mistake here : "...for oso long". I don't know if it was supposed to be Oh so long, or So long, but yeah. Thought I'd point it out. Great work with this, definitely gave me the creeps! Keep writing :)

ranDUMM
ranDUMM chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Hey,

This was a great story :) I didn't seem to find the plot scary in itself, but the way you wrote it was quite chilling. Maybe having a 'one hour later' to see what happened to the man would make it scarier? I don't know, just a suggestion :) Great work, Keep writing!

ranDUMM
ImaginationAttacks chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Quite freaky yes...