|Reviews for Flying High|
| give me november chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
i can see you have good potential.
rhyme schemes are something i have always been good with, and your writing is very similar to what i used to write.
therefore, i have a certain sentimentality to this piece, both for the similarity and because it relates to what i feel.
one suggestion i have for you is to edit this into single-space format. it makes it look neater and more clean.
consider it, unless you like this format the way it is.
overall, i really enjoyed this piece. keep it up!
also, i appreciate your opinion on my own work. please and thank you!
-give me november
| Ms.Sweet Pea chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
this sounds like a calm peom. Buts its like 'free falling' Wanting to just let go? Great poem even if i understood it wrong xD. Can you return the favor and review "Someday Love" thanks!