Reviews for Daniel
DesyaSamokhvalov chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Amazingly developed character. Truly wonderful. You don't describe too much, and you don't overuse pronouns (which, frankly, can get confusing). You don't waste time explaining or describing; the characters and setting describe themselves. You are just putting down the facts. I also like the phrase "high on God knows what." I love new takes on old phrases. Cliched ideas, indeed, are never truly cliche. They are only either used as such...or otherwise. Otherwise being the better, though more difficult and seemingly avant garde than the other.