Reviews for The Flutter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written and exceptionally explained. Every detail, every theory, it just simply intrigued me to read more and more. I like the idea of the story and simply adored your way of describing. Kind of confusing in a way, but it was a simple and unique story. Just made my day. :) Loved it, truly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story, almost like a piece of prose, is a beautiful work. It has the potentional to become a piece of art. You use words in very new and interesting way; you are very creative with them. However, this piece can get a little confusing sometimes. I don't know whether it's the style, but sometimes the grammar gets a little funny, if you know what I mean. There are other things as well that make it a little hard to keep track of. Maybe you could read through it and try to imagine yourself as a new reader, just to make sure you're not saying something that's going to completely confuse your readers. But I really like this story, it's really artistic and beautiful. There are not many writers who can experiment like you do, so I think you should definitely keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a beautiful piece. The idea is simple, yet deep and thoughtful in its way. I like how the girl phrases her words. You have a wonderful style of writing. Keep writing, cause I love it. :) |