This chapter was so cute. :D

That us so sad. I can't believe any one could ever do that.

what a horrible person...

great job :D

OMG. Talk about explosive. Actually when you had said explosive I was (suprisingly) not thinking about steamy stuff, more about actual explosives and fire but that's because I am a chemistry freak and am quite dangerous in a lab. :D

That was a great chapter. You channeled Jack's anger very well. And what the fuck is wrong with that excuse of a father? Seriously?

Oh and I know exactly what that quote means. I've been bleeding so much recently that my haemoglobin levels have fallen drastically. It doesn't help that I am aneamic. :P

How does it end up being hers forever? Doesn't that require some sort of legal thing? I can't wait to see what happens next!

Don't tell me they're gonna get married or something! *dies* that'd be awesome... that aside I really should quit speculating.

I find it really amazing that you are updating so fast :D

it's awesome :D

Oh dear... a crazy father, maybe her father should meet mine. They'd make good partners except for the fact that my father would probably kill his partner in cold blood, rather make me pull the trigger... men. :P

Poor Elizabeth.. That is so sad.. What did her father do to her? There are no visible bruises, so I'm guessing it's not that.

I love the epigraphs! They fit the story like a glove... or vice versa. :D

I can't wait for the morning now... And you are amazing with your updates! Do you even get ANY sleep?

Yeyy! Sleep... together? Damn the house for being so goddamned huge! :)

Super cute. All he needed was a little bit of Ricky Martin to bring out the real him. The Tudor thing was also a little steamy. P

YOU. SO. DID. NOT. MENTION. GASPARD ULLIEL. IN. THIS. CHAPTER.

I am sorry but wherever a hot French guy is involved I am suddenly alert and... obsessed. Especially if I happen to have 3 posters of the said guy covering the walls of my room and staring hotly back at me. Ahem...

But seriously... one day I will FIND Gaspard and get (read force) him to marry me. :D

And your own little forbidden love. :D well what can I say? I am a sucker for forbidden love. :D And good luck and have fun. :3

I like the principle of "you cook, I eat." purely because I would be the eater in that relationship...

Going with eating... I should eat my foot as it seems to be residing in my mouth far more than thought hospitable... sigh... Of course I wasn't implying that being kicked out by your parents is being the luckiest person... -you should have figured out my selective understanding- I was referring to living with a totally hot guy that wants to look after you and is totally in love with you...

And I love how close I feel to Elizabeth though I am probably an exact opposite of her... I can't cook... clean... be good with kids... or anything else that makes her very homely. :D But yeah she is a character that you can get accustomed to very easily... no wonder Mr Hotness (yeah shoot me, I have a pet name for Mr Harkness ie: Mr Hotness) feels so comfy around her. :D

Why would any father throw her out? She is like an angel!

o may the lust begin. Man this is going to be one intreasting weekend, and I just love that I have a front row sit! Yeah I love the fast updates too. Thanks!