nice story, love how its put together

Omgggg this therapist is sooo stupid it's physically painful! What kind of therapist aggravates their patient and then provokes them in to leaving, does he want to get paid or not? And watches them leave with a smug look, really, you're supposed to go and calm them down and talk like friends, that's what therapy is? And how the hell did he come to the conclusion that she can't love, did he pull that out of his ass or what? This therapist is such a dumbass I cannot continue I am sorry I'm sure it's an excellent book but I just sucha dumbass therapist sorry I'm truly sorry

Hi Ouaysis,
Before I made myself an account, I was a floater - y'know, read stories, never review, looking around.
I have to say, I've re-read your story plenty of times, and I think you are a fabulous writer. I love how you shaped all the characters so realistically, and the plot was not ridiculously overdramatic, but had enough action blended with reality to keep readers hooked. I hardly found any mistakes when I first read it, which I really liked (I absolutely despise it when people write dialouge like: "When are we going" asked Bob) and I also read the sequel. Please update on book three - I would really like to read it!

I loved this, and, not gonna lie, I'm really attached to the Plotline and characters. It'd be really cool to see the rewriting and enjoy it even more. However, if you post the revision do you mind keeping the original up? I like it too much to want to see it go.

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This is great!

Okay, it's been like six months or so since I read this series and I don't remember much about it but I do remember it was awesome. So I would love to read it again revised. This was one of my favorite stories on here.

This reminds me of the Gallagher girls series

Awesome story! Loved it every chapter. Good work!

i'm so excited! they got engaged! i'm guessing that she is about 20 years old.

a great way to end and continue on with the sequel. i cant wait to read it! :)

YES! they are finally together! i mean they kind of got together in the last chapter but... nothing brings a couple closer together than a near death experience.

oh, i forgot to mention this in the last review but i laughed along with others who have read this when the nurse caught them kissing. that was hilarious! :)

i was literally on the edge of my seat here! i have not yet read a story this good this summer! you are a great author. i really wonder if her parents and his mom are alive? i could just be misreading it though.

i have to say that the tension presented in here was awesome.

YAY! he finally acted! when will SHE act!?

yes! i knew it! and i'm guessing that the camera mathias found is one of the ones she planted.