Reviews for Heliophobia
Minor Masterpiece chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
1.) The last stanza was my favorite, it was sort of heartbreaking and obscure, a wonderful ending that tied up the emotion very nicely.

2.) I love the term "lily skin" I had never heard it before (but I'm pretty sure I must've lived under a rock or something) but it just makes me picture soft pale skin, a beautiful line to use.

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Dante's Disciple chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
This is quite sweet in a sympathetic sort of way. How the beautiful things of nature and sunshine can affect someone so.

'nightmare of the lush tropics2 nice contradiction in terms.

Nice work!
SmashedIce.X chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
This is really good! :)
xxChao chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
-sobs in corner while bee hovers above- GO AAWWAY