Reviews for Sunsets
name redacted chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Beautiful imagery. I like the line about riding out waves. It's all a really interesting abstraction, almost like a series of rapid photographs of a lifetime. Are you still dating/ does the girl reffer to you, or just anyone, wishing him the best? It's really... not exactly sweet, because it's a bit deeper than that, but along those lines. Hope he liked it.