Reviews for Phantom Heart Syndrome
jjjjjjjjjjare chapter 10 . 2/2/2011
do you think you are ever going to finish best served cold? i really liked that one...although i'm totally in love with these guys too. oh owen, quinn, you two are something...
Pione chapter 3 . 1/7/2011
Okay, I know this is just the third chapter, but I'm really liking this! Your characters - the way their conversations flow - is really engaging.
RockFan chapter 10 . 12/29/2010
I'm glad to see that maybe they're making a break through while remaining in character.

Thanks for the chapter and happy holidays.
Zethoa chapter 10 . 12/23/2010
Short and sweet, but I liked it. Quinn and Owen are addictive characters.
TouchOfChaos chapter 9 . 12/8/2010
Omg. This is great. Kind of sad and depressing but still great. I really hope you update soon because I will be waiting eagerly...

Well this is a weird review...

dakota s chapter 9 . 11/21/2010
oh yeah, finally you deliver more! and now i want more again! funny how that works. ;) but when is she gonna tell him about that awesome phone call she had with teddy? he still thinks she's victimizing her self with him still. gah! please post more soon!
teapot chapter 9 . 11/15/2010
I'm really excited to see where this leads! Great start.

Just a small detail:

"He picked up her wrists and turned them over gently and rubbed his thumbs across the light scarring. "Does it hurt?""

Owen only has one thumb.
Zethoa chapter 9 . 11/15/2010
Such a strange relationship they have. And Quinn is an absolute mess.

Can't wait to see where this could possibly go.
SpiritStand chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
wicked! (read whole thing, went back)
cccxc chapter 8 . 11/10/2010


pwease? .

six23 chapter 8 . 11/2/2010
I'm always a giddy nutjob when I see you've updated this. There's spastic clapping involved.

The characters are such little messes but there's that pinch of uncomfortable self in the heroine that makes you cringe and that won't let you stop reading.

We all have our flaws and all hope someone will care enough to help us overtake them, and you make it realistic and funny and bittersweet; and thus the giddy schoolgirl effect.

P.S. Thank you for not titling this something stereotypic about disabilities, like "Love Is Blind" or "Missing Arm, Broken Heart." Those aren't borderline offensive or anything. I look forward to seeing where this puppy's going. Congratulations on the SKOW nom.
iamsooawesomeee chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
By the third chapter I was completely in love with this story and the characters. It's a gem (in the mass of not only FictionPress stories, but all the other books in the world) that not only sparkles but has is unique and has depth; substance! Can you believe that?
dakota s chapter 8 . 10/24/2010
pft you better not make us wait so long for more missy, or no more awards for you. seriously though, this is great and you need to keep a steady supply of updates coming or face the dreadful, terrifying consequences. you've been warned.
Madame Jenn chapter 8 . 10/18/2010
I can feel Quinn's agnst and I love it. Haha.

And Owen's super cute... in a warped kind of way.

Update soon!
RockFan chapter 8 . 10/17/2010
Congratulations on the SKOW win - you deserve it. This story is a refreshing change from some of the stuff on FP. Your characters are unique and real. The storyline and the writing is fantastic. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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