Reviews for Phantom Heart Syndrome |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Just read your story, and it's pretty damn awesome. ) I love Owen's ornery shell, the way he tries so hard to be a dick but is secretly still far too human. And Quinn is fascinating, with her webs of lies and anger and fear. Fave'd! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait does Owen have the same therapist? Is that why he was outside of the same building then? (By the way, as I was typing this review, I noticed for the first time the way the word "therapist" so appropriately contains the word "rapist.") |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just to let you know, 90mg is a very small dose. Anyways, good chapter ) |
![]() ![]() Your story is odd. The characters are surprisingly open about themselves without being open. Dialogue works well with this story. I think we need to see more of Terry. He hasn't really talked so his feelings aren't present. Does Quinn have no friends? I guess with all her problems ANY relationship is hard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is something different- and I like it! The whole teacher thing was cringe-worthy but really funny! I am excited to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A jerk with a decent heart, I really love Owen in a twisted way. Oh, and I love the title. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Forrest Gump- that is an amazing film, I love the comparison of Dan to Owen. It's a cool pop culture reference. I want to know more about Marla. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't like Teddy, but I want to see more of him. LOL, Owen's failure at remembering his address. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the idea of chivalry with a twist. I want an Owen as a friend, he's cynic way of putting things even when he really isn't that bad is refreshing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm curious about her sister is it genuine concern or is there something behind it? LOVE IT. Shocked my the astounding lack of reviews for such an amazing story, that I have to review every chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love characters who have a body deficiency from some form of an accident (maybe, because I have one), there aren't enough of them on fictionpress and it makes everything more real. I love the blunt and cynic attitude. Nell |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! I like their dynamics of their relationship and their dialogue. I would like to see more description. It's a really cool story and congrats on your skow nomination! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this chapter! I like how they are slowly starting to get to know each other. Your characters are fantastic. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() i like how you're fleshing out these characters; this story seems really original. i can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story!You have a great way of writing out the characters! Keep writing! |