Reviews for Phantom Heart Syndrome
Zethoa chapter 8 . 10/17/2010
Just read your story, and it's pretty damn awesome. )

I love Owen's ornery shell, the way he tries so hard to be a dick but is secretly still far too human.

And Quinn is fascinating, with her webs of lies and anger and fear.

shutterbaby chapter 7 . 9/6/2010
Wait does Owen have the same therapist? Is that why he was outside of the same building then? (By the way, as I was typing this review, I noticed for the first time the way the word "therapist" so appropriately contains the word "rapist.")
InnocentHell chapter 6 . 8/24/2010
Just to let you know, 90mg is a very small dose. Anyways, good chapter )
MiidKniight chapter 7 . 8/9/2010
Your story is odd. The characters are surprisingly open about themselves without being open.

Dialogue works well with this story. I think we need to see more of Terry. He hasn't really talked so his feelings aren't present.

Does Quinn have no friends? I guess with all her problems ANY relationship is hard.
Twist Their Emotions chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
This is something different- and I like it! The whole teacher thing was cringe-worthy but really funny! I am excited to read more!
Power Rangers chapter 6 . 7/30/2010
A jerk with a decent heart, I really love Owen in a twisted way. Oh, and I love the title.
Power Rangers chapter 5 . 7/30/2010
Forrest Gump- that is an amazing film, I love the comparison of Dan to Owen. It's a cool pop culture reference.

I want to know more about Marla.
Power Rangers chapter 4 . 7/30/2010
I don't like Teddy, but I want to see more of him. LOL, Owen's failure at remembering his address.
Power Rangers chapter 3 . 7/30/2010
I love the idea of chivalry with a twist. I want an Owen as a friend, he's cynic way of putting things even when he really isn't that bad is refreshing.
Power Rangers chapter 2 . 7/30/2010
I'm curious about her sister is it genuine concern or is there something behind it?


Shocked my the astounding lack of reviews for such an amazing story, that I have to review every chapter.
Power Rangers chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
I love characters who have a body deficiency from some form of an accident (maybe, because I have one), there aren't enough of them on fictionpress and it makes everything more real.

I love the blunt and cynic attitude.

Power Rangers chapter 7 . 7/30/2010
I love it! I like their dynamics of their relationship and their dialogue. I would like to see more description. It's a really cool story and congrats on your skow nomination!
RockFan chapter 7 . 7/26/2010
I enjoyed this chapter! I like how they are slowly starting to get to know each other. Your characters are fantastic.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
dakota s chapter 6 . 7/14/2010
i like how you're fleshing out these characters; this story seems really original. i can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon
sunnybunny17 chapter 6 . 7/14/2010
Great story!You have a great way of writing out the characters!

Keep writing!
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