Reviews for The Living Dead
PolarBear6 chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
Awesome story! I think you are a really good writer. Your little story was exciting and I was never bored during it. Plus, it included zombies, so that automatically makes me want to read it. I really enjoyed it, and it would be great if you continued this story, or made something like it! Great job!
EnderWinner chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Interesting story. I'm not sure if you were going to go somewhere with this story, or what exactly was going on, but it was a neat little piece. So yeah, we've got a metric tonne of zombie stories about, but the point is usually to try to find something to make yours stand out a little more. The bus bit was sort of neat, so props for that. Send me a note if you would like a few more suggestions, but it was a cute little piece.