|Reviews for This Is The Story of How Im Gay|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
i'm not you, but i'd rather live on the streets. i'm in a situation with a sexually abusive family member, and i don't have the numb feeling about it. i hate him. if i go live on the streets, though, i'll end up homeless/poor for the rest of my life. i have to stay and get an education, then get out of this hellhole.
| Sha'Neekwa of the Sevateem chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
your dad sucks. how did you publish this if you live on the streets?
| dabblerette chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
wow, you are a phenomenal writer. please dont ever give up xoxo
| Anonymous Heart chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Once again, simply beautiful
| Curious chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
That one was...special. It was scary and wrong and powerful. It should be published, proclaimed for the rest of the world to see. It should be posted on a banner and laid out for the rest of the world. That was truly special.
The bit about Jamie-
That made me cry
So did the fact
That you didn't die
You were kicked out of your house
And sent to the streets
While the rest of the world
Sat back, enjoyed treats
They ignored what was happening
Right on their door
The Woolworths store
| Subbie chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Whoa... -astonished- Amazing...
| CountdownTillDawn chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
You don't have to tell me his name but tell me ur dad's address and social security number and I will KICK HIS ASS! I can't even imagine what you've gone through. It pains me to hear stories like this. I'll keep you in my prayers.
| evelett hatch chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
This is amazing!
| Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
This is sad.
| Happy to be Mad chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Damn it. I cried. My friend and I shared something similar. Fuck this must have been hard for to write… and thank you for doing so.
| eblakes93 chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
I really liked this poem's content - a lot of the poems and stories I write deal with GLBTQ themes, so this kind of thing always appeals to me. There are some lines that could be changed to make it flow a little bit - try reading it out loud to hear where changes could be made. I'll check some of your other stuff out. :D
| SingViolence chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
Such a terrible truth. I wish it didn't have to be. It angers me so. Thank you for writing