Cute :) well written, your style is very no-nonsense and to the point, your portrayal of people is accrurate and realistic.

I totally thought for a minute that he was going to say that he bought the tee for her haha. And that shirt is totally the opposite of what she got in the end.

It seemed a bit short for me but it was good in the end.

~*~Ngoc1231~*~

Made me smile. :)

That was a sweet story...but it was a bit too short. I would've liked it to go on a bit longer...(:

Nevertheless, it was written well!

Keep it up!

~ SnoQueen

Hahah, i looved this :D

Write moore(;

:D Aww, this was really sweet!

Aw! This was cute! I loved it! :)

In refrerence to your question (in case the answer is not yet obvious) yes, I will review.

:)

I liked this! It was a tasteful mix of funny and sweet.

Sure, maybe the whole kiss thing could have been stretched out a little bit more, but it's not a necessity. I mean, it is a one-shot!

This does have the potential to be a whole story, but then again, some stories are better as one-shots!

Anyways, for a first, this is quite good. :)

Good job!

~FlyingThroughDreams

I really liked this! Are you going to continue with it or was it just a oneshot?