Reviews for From Her Vein to the Floor
Susan Holt chapter 21 . 3/28/2012
I really should have expected it! I'm actually bracing myself for what's to come next. :( This guy pisses me off to no end! And let me tell you... I'm an extremelly patient and calm person! I wish I could somehow get super powers and kick his ass myself. I would enjoy it too! In the previous chapter I understood Anthony and why he was reluctant on killing his father and it was touching how much he longs for his human side, but seriously... in this chapter, he seems like he's asking for it. So, he hestated and what did he get out of this compassion? Him dying again, Ceasar getting his way and Torryn... well, I'm sure Ceasar will have something good for her in store as usual. All hope lies with Skylar now. :(
Celestialuna chapter 21 . 3/21/2012
Good chapter.
J.L. Lofthouse chapter 20 . 2/15/2012
Hey I love this story please update soon!
VirtuousMuse chapter 20 . 2/6/2012
I don't think i've ever reviewed, but i'm one of the ones for the story alert haha! Anyway, I really liked how Torryn kinda had a meltdown in the shower due to all that was happening because it showed what was at the back of her mind. It brought those thoughts forward and made her more human. And I was really able to relate to her there. A tiny moment of panic haha. Great job!
Susan Holt chapter 20 . 1/31/2012
Oh my fiddlesticks! He loves her? He LOVES her! I was expecting them to feel a bit more at comfort with each other but I never expected this! Let alone Anthony being the one who says it! Miracles never stop happening, huh?

That Will kid was weird, let me tell you... and Anthony not being able to kill his father... I know, it's weird, but seriously I understand him. It's his dad... plus, you never know what he might have in mind for him later on. I enjoyed their dialogue at the shower. They were both honest and right. I also enjoyed their sex, but knowimg me, what's new, right? lol

And the plague is back! I knew this man will be difficult to rid of. He's like the worst case of the flu... never really goes away, even after you start feeling a bit better. Bleeeehhh! I hope this time Anthony gets to kick his ancient dead ass. I really need to know what Torryn feels about the L-bomb! Gee! Now, I'm excited! :)
sexxyvampire08 chapter 20 . 1/30/2012
best chapter yet i cant wait for the battle seen next
Celestialuna chapter 20 . 1/30/2012
Good chapter.
chrissy2911 chapter 20 . 1/30/2012
This was a good chapter a bit filler ish yet still a lot of drama an action .I hate antonys dad ,I hope he gets killed
Q3pinkyrules3Q chapter 20 . 1/29/2012
Gee Wilikers Batman! What a little bastard anthonys dad is. But I freakin love this story, I love how there is just so much drama going on between torryn and anthony. It's the bestest. :D keep going!
Tigress Noel chapter 20 . 1/29/2012
Holy shit, i love this story, even though the sex scene seem to be the same only in different areas i still love it! and i dont mean anything negative against your writing its just i prefer some varied, long and detailed love scenes and i i can that it hasnt really fit into the story yet so ill be waiting!
charm en route chapter 20 . 1/28/2012
This is an awesome story and I love the plot. :)
Celestialuna chapter 19 . 1/24/2012
good chapter.
Susan Holt chapter 19 . 1/22/2012
Oh, my God! That was intense! Excellent! You kept me on my toes while reading throughout the whole chapter! The descriptions of the fights were amazing and I'm still wondering why the heck doesn't your story get more attention?

I'm glad Samuel is out of the picture. If only Ceasar would be too, but I know, he has to be around because of future events. I hope against hope Anthony is not dead yet. But then again... what if he is? Could he be that bad? Maybe he could be a different dead undead. I don't know... you need to update soon, cause my brain is going wild with speculation and you don't want me speculating, trust me. lol
Celestialuna chapter 18 . 1/2/2012
Good chapter.
Susan Holt chapter 18 . 12/21/2011
Wow! I really don't know what to think... I don't mean it in a bad way. Torryn confused me in this chapter. She felt kinda strange, different. During her argument with Skylar, I cought myself agreeing with him, then I was agreeing with her and at the end of their banter, I was utterly confused. I understand how Skylar felt and still feels but I do get Torryn as well. Maybe they need a break from each other... like a big break. However, I think Skylar is genuinely caring for her and he could help her and Anthony.

Anthony... I still cannot understand what made him react the way he did in the last chapter. This chapter, he was nice and him encouraging Torryn to talk with her mother was something I wasn;t expecting. Point to Anthony.

What the hell do Itchy and Scratchy want this time? I hate them with a passion! I hope they haven't hurt her mom... now that I'm thinking about it, I hope they don't have anything to do with Torryn's mom at all! I mean know her in the past etc. That would be some major drama... I'm bracing myself.
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