Alright! That was a kick ass chapter... literally! Your descriptions were excellent... towards the end of the fight of the women, I felt my stomach turning a bit reading of Torryn's wild and raw force and the easiness with which she decapitated her opponent. I don't understand why the male vampire let her go, but I won't question anymore, I'm glad he did.

At the beginning I was a bit confused with Antony's reaction, in not helping Torryn, then as the description of the fight went on, I got the basic notion, but again, at the end I really didn't understand what was it, that made Antony freeze in place and not go for Torryn. skylar will take care of her, I'm sure, but he lacks something really important to Torryn... he's just not Antony.

Question: Antony will eventually become undead himself? That cannot be a good thing, right? Not when we see how fucked up undead vampires can be, judging from his parents. Perhaps, Antony's letting Torryn go because of gulit and fear of her future with him? We'll see I guess. I just like them together. *sigh*

i love ur writing cant wait for the next chap

Good chapter.

Oh well... I did expect the shit to hit the fan... just not this... but I guess I should expect anything and everything from Ceasar. :(

How sick is this pheromone thing? NOT fair at all! I want Antony and Skylar to kick all of their sick, dead asses! Make Ceasar and that filthy roach Samuel pay for treating her like that. I'd like Torryn to be able to punish them as well! *evil*

So, Antony might actually like -LIKE- Torryn? Hmmm... will wonders ever cease? Me likes A LOT! I'm still torn between Antony and Skylar... can't a girl get both of them? Why when a guy does that, he's THE dude and when a waoman does it, she's a whore? Let's say no to double standards and give Torryn what she really deserves! A lot of pleasure! *smug grin*

I'll be waiting anxiously to see what happens with this feeding... who is this stranger? And will they proceed with their feeding and playing? Questions, questions... :)

Whaaaaat! Nooooo...

*hits head on desk in frustration*

I've been following your story for quite a while now. I like the way you write and I love what you do with your characters. Yes, even the ones I don't like *hint, hint... Samuel*

I like Torryn to bits. She's been through some tough shit and even though she's not mainstream, I like her just for that. I'm conflicted with the whole Anthony/Skylar thing... I like them both. Yes, I'm a big gutter mind. *smug grin*

Hope you update soon. :)

Sorry, too lazy to log in.

Nice story, BTW. I stumbled upon this one a couple hours ago and can't take my eyes off the screen afterwards. I love the way Torryn dumped Skylar. She's way better with Antony. Speaking of Antony, why don't you find someone who could train him to be stronger so he could kick his asshole father's ass? Him and that Samuel guy... Argh, they're aggravating!

Or turn him into a nonliving. Either way, I don't care as long as he grew stronger. And I disapprove of the idea of Antony losing to Skylar. But it's not like I hold a grudge against Skylar, though. The boy did nothing to me. It's just I find him annoying...

Nevertheless, update and make us happy!

That's just insanity I hate that samuel guy and antonys dad stupid asses I hope they fight back ...update soon

i cant wait for the next chap this just keeps getting better and better

Good chapter.

OMG! Is she gonna make it out alive? good chapter.

i love this story it just keeps gettng better

Wow, Skylar really acted like a dick o.o Antony at least was being nice in this chapter.

Torryn and Skylar probably could have worked out their differences but by the way they were acting in this chapter I'd say they're both still holding grudges against each other.

Still not sure about Antony, he seems a bit.. nefarious.

AMAZZINNGGG! I'm hooked officially. Wow. It's kind of refreshing to find something new and exciting XD Epic.