Reviews for From Her Vein to the Floor
Kouma the AQH chapter 7 . 11/22/2010
Is it hot in here or is it just me? Thankks for updating!
Moon Sage chapter 2 . 9/9/2010
Randomly following a stranger to fight a vicious and dangerous match with a gym/sun-happy arrogant man...a fun way to spend the night. xD Already a dark feel in the story. :D Good amount of details and the last two sentences are an awesome way to end it.
Moon Sage chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
A very good start. Full of details that gives substance to a chapter but not making it overbearing. :D
redambrosia chapter 5 . 9/9/2010
That chapter was SEXY. I applaud how you can start with an intense fight and end with a sexual high.
redambrosia chapter 4 . 8/20/2010
I loved love loves your kick ass female character and her double life! & I love how there's a vampire in here, but it's not one of those vampire stories. I love that you don't have unnecessary fluff that I usually skip over when reading stories and keep this story KICK AS.S!
Trance19666 chapter 3 . 7/26/2010
i like this chapter the best

the characters(Antony and Torryn,you didn't really write about the others) are well thought out

the plot is interesting

Torryn's like a Dampire right? (don't think i spelled that right, but you know what i mean? half human/vampire like thing, or is that elf?)

and the title also matches the story (very clever of you)

i know in your profile, that you said you don't often write happily ever after, i usually don't like dark endings but i like your stories and i won't stop reading just because sad end.

good job you doing

i hope you will keep going

and not stop because other people were whining about your stories (i can't remember if i was one of them *frown*)

Krystal Angeline chapter 1 . 7/2/2010

this boy already has my heart... He makes me shudder and grin.

...I want him for my birthday!

I love the fact that a vampire has a cell phone... It's so...

Dracula meets the 21st century. It makes me giggle.

To the point, however! I love this chapter. It is a great beginning to what I'm sure will be an epic story!

Krystal Angeline chapter 3 . 7/2/2010
I love this chapter.

one of my favorite things about this story is that Torryn's discovery of her awesomeness isn't instantaneous.

it's real. everything about her is very real. Her excitement, her fear, her disbelief, and even her impossibilities seem possible.

This is the work of a great writer.

Krystal Angeline chapter 2 . 7/2/2010
Bahahahaha "Psycho-bitch instincts or not."

My favorite line!

I love Antony... he's smooth and sexy and suave!

He makes me melt!

This whole story is fun! The description is wonderful.

redambrosia chapter 3 . 6/30/2010
THAT WAS INTENSE! I love kick ass chicks!
redambrosia chapter 2 . 6/7/2010
kaaona chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
really good can't wait to read more!
xCynicx9 chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
I was a good start to a long story. I loved how you introduced each character with such detail. I did not like, however, how you made her "love" in at first sight.

Keep writing.
redambrosia chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
That was intense! Of course your new story would not be a disappointment ;)
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