Reviews for History
Minor Masterpiece chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
1.) Concept Amazing, it shows a wonderful view of the teenage romantic mind. I like the second stanza particularly (I seem to like all your second stanzas, haha). The part about the heart doodles was genius.

2.) The flow was nice and the word choice was beautiful. Once again your last line was very memorable. I truly enjoyed this poem.

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oxygenicide chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
Haha I love this! Especially

"how would you like to be a french war hero?

or perhaps, the new president of the united states?"
a smile from a veil chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
I adore this piece. :) I love "ridiculous, don't you think?

rewriting american history, so that ours doesn't look so bleak." So sweet, yet sad. Wonderful!
Whaaoouusses chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
This is such an original poem, it actually feels like a breath of fresh air. Funny thing is reading your poems is my form of procrastination and right now i'm supposed to be doing the Cold War. This just made my day haha
A.Funeral.For.Edgar chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
I loved it! I've been reading some of your poems since you reviewed mine, and I've noticed how well-written they all are. They're so cute, yet in a way that disguises the simple cuteness as something mature and beautiful... I don't really know how to describe it, but I guess two words will have to do; great writing.
name redacted chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
I love the wistful mood of the poem, and the dark twist at the end. Great poem.