I really like this start and I think it could be a really good story... Update, please.

Oh! I want to know what's gonna happen at niight! When Nathan will come back from his night out! :O :D :D A

Please Update SOON This Time! Thx

I have a feeling more awkward stuff is gonna happen :)

Ha, I like the chapter title.

I forget who Grady is. Oops. haha.

I liked this chapter, it gives more of Nathan (though he wasn't even in it). I'm so stoked to see Lottie's antics for Nathan and what Lydia does about it. :)

-Cecilie

This is really good! I like your story a lot your characters are awesome! I love that you used that song for the title! That song is so awesome! Just like your story! I hope you update soon. I wanna see what happens next!

Tootles,

Roselyn

This story is gorgeous. And the title is good, reminds me of the Dixie Chicks, ya know? "Ready to Run." (:

I cannot wait for this to be updated, and no, I didn't spot any cliches in the chapter. You're probably just hyper-aware since you're worried about how people will take it. But gosh, this is a new twist on the cliche arranged marriage and it is refreshing. You have done great so far, good luck in the future.

-Tay

Hey,

Wow. I love the story. I normally love the whole arranged marriage scenario, but the twist of going back to high school (like Billy Madison) makes it so different, but still good.

You story is very unique for that reason as well as others.

For one, Lydia is a very damaged protagonist. She was exposed to a lot of cruelty at the hand of her step sister and Nina Swan. Not to mention the lack of her confidont, Nathan, she was very isolated. All her cold behaviour makes sense after reading this chapter.

At first I thought it was a bit rushed in the begining with the whole marriage and honeymoon, but it's another defining characteristic. It works for the story.

The dialogue is very good and not forced. I like the fact Nathan is like a wall, and just keeps bouncing back with his fond teasing, regardless of how cold Lydia acts. He seems to be quite the gentleman behind all his teasing. The two characters have great chemistry and I can't wait to see how that develops.

Keep up the great work. I am definitely hanging on for another chapter.

I can't wait to read more,

Garneau.

Ah! This is AMAZING! (:

Continue on this please

Very nicely written. I like that she handed him back the panties and said he should save them for his mistresses, but I actually hope they'll come to fall in love.

I think you're throwing too much in here. Going back to highschool is definitely throwing plausibility out the window, you might be better off taking it in a different direction.

Other than that, I'm really enjoying it. Keep it up. :) I'd like to see more of Lottie.

-Cecile

ohh no..back to school! lol i'd be gutted if i was them.

aww their so cute together :)

cant wait for the next update :D

Jade

xoxo

aha, i love the story so far, no matter wat! cant wait til next chap. keep slammin'

-pandakim :]

hii

ur right, it is a bit cliche, but not too cliche because stuff like this does happen sometimes :)

THIS IS WHAT I LIKE!

I like the Cinderella analogy, and I'm curious about Nathan's reaction to Lottie. Actually, I really want to see where this goes. Loving it, it's cute and intriguing at once.

-Cecile

Interesting, I can't decide if this is predictable or not. :)

I like it. :)

-Cecile